Lovely introduction, but one issue: The text in the dropdown menus is illegible for me. Its the same color as the background on dark mode so I simply cannot read it unless I hover over each option individually.
Also for some reason on the save screen the save icons are missing? In the little box on the left that you click in order to save/load its just grey/green with no icon inside like there usually is. This doesnt impact gameplay, I can click the box just fine, its just weird to look at.
ahhhh I can’t wait to start this! It sounds so good, and your writing is quite excellent!
just a small heads up: you refer to D as a “he” in the sentence starting with “As far as rivals go…” in D’s first paragraph. Just if you wanted to stay consistent!
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oh i will be crying!!!
Lovely introduction, but one issue: The text in the dropdown menus is illegible for me. Its the same color as the background on dark mode so I simply cannot read it unless I hover over each option individually.
Also for some reason on the save screen the save icons are missing? In the little box on the left that you click in order to save/load its just grey/green with no icon inside like there usually is. This doesnt impact gameplay, I can click the box just fine, its just weird to look at.
Really great start! Will love to see more of this when you are able!
Oooo this sound reallh cool!!! Looking forward to chapter 2!!
ahhhh I can’t wait to start this! It sounds so good, and your writing is quite excellent!
just a small heads up: you refer to D as a “he” in the sentence starting with “As far as rivals go…” in D’s first paragraph. Just if you wanted to stay consistent!
Will be back once I finish working :’)
Oh thank you for catching that! Will edit it now :) Hope your work goes well!
Soo sooo good! 💖 The end of the demo hit me like a slap in the face - how dare you, dear author end it in such a way?! 😱🤪